Friday, July 31, 2009

Loves Flaming Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

let me walk by your side
let me feel what you try to hide.
let me see where you have been
from the beginning to the end.
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Christine Kerr 02 August 2009

I think this would be under, 'Having Sweet Dreams' or Only In Your Dreams, Every persons desire, Beautiful thoughts. 10++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 August 2009

beautifully written....the care and devotion of the person shows in each line....10

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 August 2009

Well expresed. The starting two verses were really good.

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Stay away from my girlfriend..! fine lines sir.

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