Loves First Kiss Comments

Romance - unfortunately sometimes forgotten. Reminders to rekindle are essential. Thank you for sharing.

I am foremost a romantic, you had me hooked from the start. good work.

Very nice well expressed

That first love is never forgotten.. this poem captures the essence of innocent love! ; D

Soft, sweet whispers of loves ancient melody............ yet it flutes by symphony through hollowness as ancient wishes runs avidly by rungs of desire, passion when seems to cry in wilderness, yet with all ingenuities by pangs of sadness, most heart touching as diction flows gently,10+++, thanks for sharing

wow...heartbreakin poem...xpressed pretty well usin poetic devices. well, the title was more attractive than the poem... anyways, these lines r literally awesome, 'Star struck eyes turn from love to hate. Two innocent souls l ost in the hands of fate.'