Love's Deepest Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Love's Deepest Pain

Rating: 4.5


The mood is right,
All dreams thru Poetry
Have taken flight,
They take me back
To, you
In a way
That only Poetry
And true Love
Can do,
And I cry
Knowing that
My dream
Will not ever
In our time
Come true,
Now,
I feel
Like a child
With a broken doll
That won't
Come back to
Life,
No matter
What you do.
Now,
My life is tied
To the past
I could not face
But no longer
Can forget
Nor hide.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

Love, life and Poetry have that magical and special bond. Poetry understands love and life, their pains and joys. The pains we feel, we could express through Poetry and somehow the void we feel, it heals. Poetry is indeed a healer.

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Sandra Feldman 27 December 2022

So true, so true, so true, dear poetess and friend, you capture and express the essence of poems and poetry in the truest and most beautiful way imaginable and deeply felt,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

A deeply touching and poignant poem so powerfully expressed but there is so much tenderness in those words used that could tear our hearts.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

Yes, when true love strikes, it will follow you wherever you go...until eternity. Beautiful, beautiful poem, my dearest friend. Honest and wonderfully executed. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade. To my favorites.

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 November 2022

Great write Sandra! Five stars*

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2024

This is true in song and in poetry….my friend?

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2024

And in the end, I love you take is equal to the love you make,

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2024

Is equal to the love

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2024

The love we make

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Bill Cantrell 10 November 2024

And in the end,

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