Come, come climb with me,
to the top of loves cloud,
let us drift off together,
ignoring the crowds below,
...
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Very sensual and yet not offensively at all. It is the love we all dream of- -softly curled up on a cloud and floating above the irritating demands of everyday life... well written! ! ! ! very well written! ! ! 10++++++++
Nice imagery to celebrate your love. Flying with clouds with the lover must be most amazing thing. 'ly on and on forever, gazing into each others eyes, lost in love forever, just you and I.'... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for introducing me to rime royale. A top-shelf love poem.