Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Loves Addiction Comments

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Half not whole, mind and soul.
Lurching ever forward, stumbling, crawling.
Sensibility confused, senses confounded.
Heart breaking, fears all founded…
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 March 2019

Desire all consuming, drowned out with a whisper, Softly moulding words feeding infatuation, Yet starving the soul still seeking fulfilment. Loves addiction grips you-holds you.. love, infatuation, romance, wishes, eros, desires. well penned poem. all emotions everywhere. love ur poems. tony

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Lodigiana Poetess 02 March 2019

It is so encouraging to receive such structured and positive comments Tony! My hope when writing is that in some way the reader finds a connection with whatever it is I am trying to express..You are more than kind Sir! thank you xx

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2017

Yet you fight! ! Thanks for sharing.

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