Sunday, November 20, 2005

Lovers' Villanelle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time after time, two lovers return
To meet face-to-face and eye-to-eye.
With just one touch, their passions burn.
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Bobbie Ann Pimm
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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 December 2005

True love is earned. They meet face-to-face, he smiles, she sighs. Yes, it is true. It should not end in infatuation, but in real heart-felt love. A nice poem indeed.

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Cara Green 21 November 2005

Good poem, I don't know what a few of the words meant, but it was still good.LOL Cara

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Cara Green 21 November 2005

Good poem, I don't know what a few of the words meant, but it was still good.LOL Cara

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Ronberge .. 20 November 2005

Nice Villanelle. Amicalement votre, Ronberge

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