Lovers On The Coast Comments

Love is a beautiful thing, you know. Good one there

Your words make the one lives in the ambiance of the meaning, so we can feel each word of the poem, Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Your poem is lovely Sir, you richly painted the image of the coast. my favourite is the second to the last stanza, ...the moon appeared; stars sneaked from its hiding.. Wow! I feel you may need to remove the repetition of title and name at the beginning. Thanks for sharing and please read my poem 'Calculus Of A Life Time'