Monday, July 1, 2013

Lovers On The Beach Comments

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We watched the sun rising in the sky
We were on the beach, just she and I.
A cool gentle breeze blowing upon our face
As we stared into the depths of space.
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louis rams
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Patricia Grantham 29 July 2013

A very nice romantic love poem. Nothing can compare with two lovers sitting on the beach. A very serene and relaxing atmosphere especially to be enjoyed by lovers. A lovely write. Please read my poem A Lovers Stroll.

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

a lovely write Luis. I enjoyed the read

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Don Nguyen 01 July 2013

My own story too Very nice. Thanks

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