Wednesday, October 15, 2014
Lovers' Moment Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Solitary white lily in the field
Danced bare in the wind
Swaying, invitingly shaking her head
Caressing wind, balmy kissed
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Akhtar Jawad
16 October 2014
You have added another love story of personified objects. Imagining Lily and the wind as two lovers who were constrained to be separated from the embrace in a lovely wet night as the dawn has started peeping and disturbing presents a lovely romanticism.
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8/1/2025 8:00:09 PM # 1.0.0
Passion surging, lovers embraced Swaying blissfully in a union of two In the lover's corner, let the lily and the wind remain in deep embrace! Don't peep! Enjoyed!