Tuesday, September 11, 2007

**lovers In Paradise Comments

Rating: 2.9

Let us stay here now, forever, You and I.
Let us stay in Summer's sweetness
with the dew drops in our hair
And the scented smells of soft sweet roses
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Jon Alan
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David Taylor 11 September 2007

i love your poem Jon, it is so heartfelt. Best wishes and hoping for more from David.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 September 2007

This a beautiful romantic poem... Jon.. Fantastic write 10

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