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Wow! A lovely haiku Bipasa! I could trace fascinating beauty in your poetic expression!
Wonderful art and imagery dear Bipasha, you can draw sketches of human mind as well as nature so artistcally. 10+++++ for the sharing. Subhas
Such a nice poetry (Haiku) ............................10+
dark blue draws the heart of lovers in silhouette....... 10++++
Lovely lines that are loaded with a love that is both creative and cmpelling!
Beautiful haiku. Well conceived and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
Very descriptive Haiku. Loved it. The flashpoint of love. 10+++++
Hi Bipasha, Wonderful images. Gelling with the theme perfectly. Small, but very powerful words. This is all haikus are about. You have captured the essence of the poetic form. Congrats. A 100++ Onto MyPoemList..
A wonderfully crafted haiku. Nature seen as lovers. Lovely!
Yes- this is Haiku at its finest! Compelling comparison of natural conditions with human conditions. 10
Wow! Wonderful contemplation....loved this sweet haiku. Top score.