Lovers Crystal Stream Comments

You have selected glorious words to write a simply beautiful poem. I was entranced how many wonderful images you captured and it was fuzzy and warm. So very well done! 10 Karin Anderson

Nice poem but sooo long... A little shorter please

The poem has wonderful imagery A beautiful and warming poem. Excellent work

a delightful read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Nice developement of the imagery, Britney.

Nice smooth flowing poem Britney. Nice write. Mark

Beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery. Words flow like stream. Keep writing.......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

Very nicely done Britney and the imagery took me back a few years. You wove a good story with your poem and placed the reader right there. I noticed a couple typos in S2 - L1 & L4. I'll let you catch them. Nice work young lady. T.L.

Interestin write dear............................

Pure romanticism. I think this is one of the most complete and vivid descriptive writings I have ever read in this context. There are a lot of people who might try to write something like this, but they would certainly fail to include all that you did. Just wonderful. GW62

Excellent romantic write Britney...well written...10++

Lovely imagery painted lines, shine from the page like a summers day.