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Sweet, beautiful and touching; a wonderful poem.

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. This is a marvelous poem on love with stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious to read. I want to quote some lines here... If you are heart, I wanna be your beat. If you are cake, I wanna be your sweet. If you are kite, I wanna be your flight. If you are dream, I wanna be your night. If you are guitar, I wanna be your dhun, If you are star, I wanna be your moon... I appreciate the theme but I couldn't find the meaning of 'dhun' in English Dictionary, ofcourse I have understanding. Many thanks dear Pratikshya, may God nourish your poetic thoughts.

If you are heart I wannabe your beat If you are cake I wannabe your sweet If you re kite I wannabe your flight If you are dream i wannabe your flight- -Wow- -Beautiful with rhyme and rhythm and love, thanks for sharing.It is perfect 10

Wonderful love, my dear..

Fantastic lines, enjoyed reading it.

Beautiful poem love it

If you are star, I wanna be your moon. If you are lover, I wanna be your choice. wonderful comparisons my dear you have lot of imagination. write and do not stop writing. At your age it is marvelous. thank you , tony

the rhymes are used beautifully pratiksha!

Thank to y'all for ur comments.................

Wonderful... Keep it up...

very very very beautiful poem Pratikshya! i loved the last line... nothing could be better for its end, ... thanx! ! :)

Fantastic poem.. Romantic and intense... Great