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When at first we met each other
We were trekking toward the peak
With first love and expectations
We trod the path, we trod the path.
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Beautiful how you have used nature to symbolize the various stages of love. Gave you a big 10!
Wow, a beginning of something beautiful, thought met challenges along the way, but also met some good too, and at d end it was as beautiful as the beginning. Wonderful
waiting to be touched once again. Nice work. Thansk for sharing.
Love is a spiritual experience, a voyage of bliss that is fraught with stumbling blocks. It needs careful nurturing at all times to maintain its blissful nature. A lovely poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Sumit. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A Wonderful poem. HOw you describe the transition of life in poetic and visual terms. wonderful. gave you a 10.
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7/25/2025 8:18:05 AM # 1.0.0
the last paragraph touched my heart..brilliant lines...the feel is just amazing....wonderful thank you jaya
Thank you for your comments on Haiku-4 an this poem.