Friday, December 16, 2011

Lover Sea Comments

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Numb like burned out prairie
Nothing seems too reach
Only the sea seems to be my lover
Awakened mermaids swim without war
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Kee Thampi 16 December 2011

The frill of dreamy writes Along the shore childhood Some strange hope not stepped on Some innocent prophesy

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Sara Fielder 16 December 2011

There are so many visuals in this poem I admire. They give me the sense that you might sink until you can find her.

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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