Lover’s Rhymes Comments

does form follow function or function follow form....hhmmm.....

i dont like Amr Diab much, but i loved your poem! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++

vow..meaningfull words and lines. loved it.and a great dedication. posted 10 love surya

Super poem and flows easly.

nice style used to write this poem.

Perfect........ Perfect, flawless write full marks...10+ great work

Nice feelings.lovely poem.

This should be set to music Ahmad...regards Alf

The last two lines really elevate the poem. Nice verses.

A great poem and i really like this stanza because it is so true: if love descends no one will be betrayed hurt or left It is a good thing that you dedicate this poem to the singer Amr Diab...I hope he would see this poem! ! :) 10++....Merna

Great poem i love it! 10`plus Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

Mesmerizing, mellifluous words. Literally poetic.10.

Clever how you made patterns with the words. A tender poem

Poem has an elevated flavor about it.

Incredible song to touch the heart, imagery good throughout- a fine read Ahmad

if love descends no one will be betrayed hurt or left good!

Your singing love poetry is melodious to hear!

The melody of love plays all the way through this stunning piece of poetry. There is love everywhere in the images and the pattern created from the typing is incredible. Excellent work! 10 Karin Anderson

YOUR FIRST VERSE OF MESMIRIZING MELODIES SAYS IT ALL A GREAT WRITE

where is a true love there are heavens- correct> where there is true love there are heavens. this line is striking.shan