Lover's Lane Comments

simply brilliant. I have read this many times at another forum and you words are cleverly chosen and just amazing.

A bitter sweet ending..like it...the course of true love...

A true Gem of writing. I think you have put to words, what we mere writers of prose have tried for so long, to do. You are the master of poetry, my friend

A mesmerizing, stunning piece. As always, your words flow so nicely and your rhythm, rhyme patterns are superb. I really enjoyed the repitiion of 'Lovers Lane.'

Thank you for reminding me of the times I felt the same. I believe love is never lost. It leaves us stronger and better, and able to look for a more fulfilling love on the 'lover's lane'. Few suggestions: could use more intense despair, and stronger sweeter memories via language.

That was quick! ! ! Easy come easy go! ! ! ! Do you have one about Lover's leap? I'm just kidding-I'm in one of those ' giddy spring' moods.Sorry if I hurt your feelings --it is a good poem, Wolfie....makes me think of the good ole days......kidding about that, too! ! ! ! ! !

lovely poem as usual. keep it up Britney

That was....lovely! But tell me...is there really some place you know...you know...this Lover's Lane? Charming, if its so! Lucky girl who got your attention there! Cheers. Subroto

Stunning Greenwolfe! The repetition at the end of each stanza works so well, and not one I have learned in workshops. Your plan was wonderfully executed and this reiteration helps make the poem so unforgettable. I love it all.....Karin Anderson

brilliantly crafted poem sir.........little sad but worth reading......10

This poem is real. I don't have the words. I say it is publisher's quality if anything is.

Efficiently written, beautiful-estetic, subject matter always current. Good curiously the Author is bringing flashback motifs up. The poem is loaded feeling and this emotions which a reader can feel. I like it. Greeting for you. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

With your love poems my friend i could say you are so sweet and loving man, though strick and i guess perfectionist in all things you do...but have a soft and tender heart you have...all reflects in your poems! ! ! Great and fabulous master pieces written...poignancy have this one in the Lover's lane.............10

A wonderful poem of love lost and wonder about lasting love being attained. As always your poems are so touching. Thank you for sharing.

A wistfully sad love poem - -and beautifully executed..... thank you 10 from Fay..

A very poignant & heart touching poem Wolfe! Passionately expressed! Thank you for sharing! ! Best regards ! ! *10*! Friend Thad

this is sad bro.. but efficiently written. I hope it is NOT true! a 10