Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Lover's Lane Comments

Rating: 4.5

There must still be a lover's lane,
safely shaded in the hills,
where lovers go to hide the pain
the careless universe instills.
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Barry Middleton
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Poppy Miller 04 April 2016

This reminded me of my last home, where the children grew up. At the bottom of my garden was a lane called 'Lovers Lane.' It was also known as 'Tinkers Alley.' There were trees on either side of a stream and you would get all the courting couples along there in the evenings and during the day, my children would play there, so I always knew where they were. Thanks for the memory Barry.

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Barry Middleton 04 April 2016

Thank you for the thank you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 March 2016

There must still be a lover's lane Safely shaded in the hills, where lovers go to hide the pain the careless universe instills. Superb imagery and beautiful diction. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Barry Middleton 16 March 2016

Thank you for reading and rating.

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