Lover's Lane Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Lover's Lane

Rating: 5.0


Here I am just all alone without your love dear.
Will I ever know a love that can remain?
As I struggle through my life without contentment,
Can I ever find it here on Lover's Lane?

I can't sing a loving song with cheerful feeling.
I've not broken any link of our love chain.
I'll forever be required to keep the memory
Of the times we spent right here on Lover's Lane.

Though I know that you're still near, it's not forever.
And this place so seldom sees love's bitter pain.
I still cling to fading hope that you'll remember,
How you felt when we once loved on Lover's Lane.

I can't see, for I'm still blind in love with you dear,
How I'll manage if your love I can't regain.
I shall take whatever comes as I'm not sorry
For the moments we spent here on Lover's Lane.

I just hope you take the time you need my darling.
And I hope that you don't dwell on sad refrain.
Just remember all the joy we had together,
When we held each other close on Lover's Lane.

If it is the last good-bye for our love darling.
And the words you try to use don't make it plain.
Please remember these three words, 'It's lost forever.'
Like the loves so often found on Lover's Lane.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

That was quick! ! ! Easy come easy go! ! ! ! Do you have one about Lover's leap? I'm just kidding-I'm in one of those ' giddy spring' moods.Sorry if I hurt your feelings --it is a good poem, Wolfie....makes me think of the good ole days......kidding about that, too! ! ! ! ! !

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Britney Hogue 21 April 2009

lovely poem as usual. keep it up Britney

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Subroto Chatterjee 21 April 2009

That was....lovely! But tell me...is there really some place you know...you know...this Lover's Lane? Charming, if its so! Lucky girl who got your attention there! Cheers. Subroto

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Stunning Greenwolfe! The repetition at the end of each stanza works so well, and not one I have learned in workshops. Your plan was wonderfully executed and this reiteration helps make the poem so unforgettable. I love it all.....Karin Anderson

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 April 2009

brilliantly crafted poem sir.........little sad but worth reading......10

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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

simply brilliant. I have read this many times at another forum and you words are cleverly chosen and just amazing.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 24 April 2009

A bitter sweet ending..like it...the course of true love...

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James Nall 24 April 2009

A true Gem of writing. I think you have put to words, what we mere writers of prose have tried for so long, to do. You are the master of poetry, my friend

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Cristy Upshaw 22 April 2009

A mesmerizing, stunning piece. As always, your words flow so nicely and your rhythm, rhyme patterns are superb. I really enjoyed the repitiion of 'Lovers Lane.'

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M A 21 April 2009

Thank you for reminding me of the times I felt the same. I believe love is never lost. It leaves us stronger and better, and able to look for a more fulfilling love on the 'lover's lane'. Few suggestions: could use more intense despair, and stronger sweeter memories via language.

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