The fog won't lift,
Heavy clouds of pain
Have caused,
The flowing tears
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Reminds me of Cheryl’s poem A POET NEEDS THE PAIN. You have just written a heartfelt poem, dear Ma’am Sandra....10++++
The best and saddest poem I have read in a long while, every word fits perfectly in place... to my favorite list.10+
These are results when emotions are built up, we have inner desires, but if the situation does not permit it be successful, it is better to leave a void behind. how painful it might be. A perfectly created poem that describes the present emotive attitude well. I enjoyed it very much, dear Sandra. An excellent poem.