Friday, August 23, 2019

Lover's Fog Comments

Rating: 5.0

The fog won't lift,
Heavy clouds of pain
Have caused,
The flowing tears
...
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Sandra Feldman
fog
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2019

These are results when emotions are built up, we have inner desires, but if the situation does not permit it be successful, it is better to leave a void behind. how painful it might be. A perfectly created poem that describes the present emotive attitude well. I enjoyed it very much, dear Sandra. An excellent poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2019

Reminds me of Cheryl’s poem A POET NEEDS THE PAIN. You have just written a heartfelt poem, dear Ma’am Sandra....10++++

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C F 24 August 2019

The best and saddest poem I have read in a long while, every word fits perfectly in place... to my favorite list.10+

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