Thursday, May 31, 2007

Lover's Crown Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh for the twilight to shine once again upon thee
Alas once more ride beneath the silver glow of the moon
To hold thy hand and thou would never flee
Captured by a sweet serenade of a lover’s swoon
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Patricia Gale
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Original Unknown Girl 01 June 2007

Beautiful scribing, I really enjoyed the 'olde worlde' dialect in this. Deliciously penned Patricia. HG: -) xx

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Marvin Brato 31 May 2007

I agreed to Frank and Ashley, i enjoyed it! . More power! .Another 10.

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17TH Century Romannce a la Patrice! Very fine work young lady! FjR

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Ashley S 31 May 2007

Wow, a gorgeous poem indeed. Very elegant and romantic this poem is. It was a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing. Ashley

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