Friday, May 29, 2015

Lover Lost Comments

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Silently she stands upon the shore,
her heart broken at the very core.

Watching the storm rage over the sea,
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Alesia Leach
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Khairul Ahsan 28 March 2020

Lovers may leave, but love lingers on. Sometimes, the mere thought of it is soothing, rather than saddening. Loved the comments of Valsa George and Chinedu Dike.

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Jessica Nichols 21 July 2018

When someone is still loved and thought of, they never really die... Well formulated and executed. Touching.

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Trinity Baldwin 21 July 2018

I like this poem a lot. The longing for lost love. The way that our memories and desire for someone is so much more pure and intensified when looking into the past. That love that you had seems so much better, the crystal ball does that. Good read!

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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2015

Piece of great elegance insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, it's also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A beautiful poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing and remain blessed Alesia.

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Valsa George 05 June 2015

The pensive musing of one who has lost her love! Quite touching! !

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