Thursday, August 18, 2005

Lover Comments

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I scattered your words across the beach tonight
under a three quarter moon
while gentle waves lapped at my toes
and the whole evening seemed to vibrate
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Gainor Ventresco
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Max Reif 01 September 2005

a very powerful piece of writing. I don't know that you could have expressed it more powerfully. I wasn't expecting the kick, it really got me. such a painful experience.

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Gainor Ventresco

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