I have spent restless nights remembering a face I only knew once.
A fleeting desire of a slumber all to permanent,
sweeter than any woman ever graced by crimson fingertips.
I have known embrace, but nothing like that of forever.
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'A lover of equal standing in death and in love' - is an excellent expression. But, 'with a vessal unworthy of such delicate delights' - what is the meaning of vessal here? Did you mean vessel? You are only 19 and you have so many poems to your credit, I am really amazed!
A refined poetic imagination, Crimson. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.