Thursday, April 16, 2009

Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watching the young women and man lying in the grass,
it makes me smile.
It’s a sunny day at the lake, and they’re in love.
He gently touches her finger tips with his light pink lips.
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Megan Collins
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Brittanie Thornton 21 April 2009

Awww, I think this is so romantic, if only it ws me in that poem! ! ! =]=P

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Leslie Neiwert 17 April 2009

RO-MAN-CE big time! ! ! ! ! ! lol not that's a bad thing, but you wouldn't catch me dead watching someone else when I could do it myself ^.^ lol anywho, poem was great, really into it. I could see the action in my mind. Love the detail, which was on the little side. ^.^

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