Thursday, January 12, 2006

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What to expect from this love
That came to me some time ago
And filled my days with joy and light
What to desire if you are so far
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Anna Cellmer
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Martin A. Ramos 12 January 2006

Anna: So much love, though heartfelt and beautiful, at times is overwhelming Have you consider using a fix form, such as a sonnet or lyric, to give a more controlled venue to that emotion. Just a thought. Best, Martin

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Anna Cellmer

Anna Cellmer

Olsztyn, Poland
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