Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Lovely Sunrise (Tanka) Comments

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"A lovely sunrise
for it's like a sparkling gold
in the sea of glass
with the flight of birds singing
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2017

Golden light is sparked by sunrise and beautiful Tanka has attracted golden attention of reader. We are hearing signing of birds in imagery as they are taking flight. Excellently penned poem is shared about nature....10

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Thank you again, Mr Kumarmani Mahakul for your exceptional comment, really appreciate this a lot.

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