Sunday, August 12, 2012

Lovely Rain! Comments

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I hear your feeble voice from a distance,
Run towards you nervously in expectation,
Not so weak, but not so audible in expanse,
The loud cry for love and affection,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Chandra Thiagarajan 19 August 2012

Rain is always welcome but as you say at times it drowns us in tears! Nice little poem. Thanks.

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Vinod Sharma 13 August 2012

Good imagination, nicely worded!

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