Lovely Queen Comments

- The queen remains ever in the mind. And the stress on the end rhyme- a beauty for the poem indeed. UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kannur 670307 Feb 26,2014 - - - - - - -

Great Awasum Terrence3 minutes ago Well done Comment +1

Love's labour lost.Good poem Shantanu Chindhade3 minutes ago Neatly woven love story with sad ending thus taking to certain height.Good poem, Shantanu chindhade Comment +1

great Joe Bedwell5 minutes ago almost a 5

Oh, dear queen I was very keen

stay fine as ever, I like it sir.

Moving and eloquent David Soule2 minutes ago To me, its is almost as if the author or the subject is envious of this bird and that this bird is the subjects true love, it seems that the last two verses He loves the bird for its wings that take it to places really far its almost in the subjects mind but still he blind and complacent.

Oh, dear queen I was very keen