Saturday, October 17, 2009

Lovely Moonlight. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Droplets of utter delight
Adorn the fall of moonlight.

Soundless, pale allure splashes
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Fay Slimm
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Janell Cressman 31 October 2009

wow amazing poem! ! ! !

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

This is charming and you've captured the allure and twinkle of the moon I think..(smile)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 October 2009

fine wording! awesome poem! 10+

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Sandra Fowler 24 October 2009

The moon, like snow, touches a landcape with glamour. You have captured the magic in this beautiful lyric. I like what you see through the ageless panes of your soul.10+++. Love. Sandra

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I was drawn into the moon's pull with its, could I dare to say a wee bit of seduction. Beautifully written Fay......10 Karin

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Georgia Girl 19 October 2009

such gorgeous imagery, I LOVE the glow of the full moon on the earth and grass and everything...beautiful write Fay...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 October 2009

Hey Fay. This is such a beautiful poem. You use the kinda of words that keep the reader spellbound to your poems.. Very lovely to read...10++ lovesss Shan

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Carol Gall 17 October 2009

moonlight sounds so mysterious 10 fay

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Fay Slimm

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