Friday, May 24, 2013

Lovely- Lovely Pearly Dew Comments

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Lovely- lovely pearly dew
Rising sun with morning new
Breezy-breezy air that sough
Gaily-gaily, dancing bough
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Aftab Alam
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2013

Lovely work. Thaks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Farah Ilyas 26 May 2013

musical & soft nature rhymes for kids, good one

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Wahab Abdul 26 May 2013

with sweet and lovely rhymes.. love it.. do not ask me why... ha ha.. readers along with the author know it..8

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 May 2013

When I finished reading the poem I felt the music of the words - so lovely, -lovely! And when I came upon the notes I was really happy of your beautiful intention! Yes, it's a good poem for kids to sing along! Very nice, Aftab!

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Fatima Nusairat 24 May 2013

lovely pearly dew indeed :)

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