Saturday, May 30, 2020

Lovely Hibiscus Comments

Rating: 4.6

Hibiscus bushes
With lovely whitest white blooms
Adorned the pathway
Where a lady dressed in white
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 30 March 2022

True picture of alluring lady in white.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2021

A lady dressed in white in this loveliest Tanka! 5 Stars full on Top for this amazing Tanka!

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A beautiful poem on Hibiscus. We have plenty of hibiscus flowers in India. The red ones are very popular and are used as flowers of worship to God's and Goddesses. White hibiscus is rare. How beautiful for the bride to walk through a bush of white hibiscus flowers....charming poem...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2020

Flowers! ! Lovely! Pathway of love and life; With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 08 June 2020

White color is so appealing! I can visualize that pathway where white hibiscus flowers peep out from the foliage of emerald leaves and smile at the passengers and a lady dressed in pure white walking along reminding us of a bride adorned in her silky bridal finery! A beautiful pen picture, Rose Marie!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 June 2020

2) especially when they are in bloom really imaginable in my illusory view, especially that lady in white walking like an alluring bride so imaginable those steps.... i like very much this symphony in white, especially with that lady walking like an alluring bride! Most beautiful, loveliest worded, dear great Poetess! to MyPoemsList

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 June 2020

1) Amazing and indeed alluring, dear great Poetess, the words you created and expressed I like very much to have hibiscus bushes (and I have that too) as a border in the garden,

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Shaun Cronick 03 June 2020

A poem pretty as a picture and all readers can picture the scene, thanks to you're beautifully expressed words and imagery. Thank you Rode Marie for your golden white poem. 10++ and added to my band of gold treasure trove. Take care and I wish you well.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 June 2020

So nice, so beautiful, loved the poem.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 31 May 2020

meet all the requirement of a tanka fine

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 May 2020

A wonderfully written composition. Superb poem, dear ate Rose.....10+++❤️❤️❤️

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Anjandev Roy 31 May 2020

Adorned the pathway.....significant. anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 30 May 2020

Lovely tanka RM.Quite charming!

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Susan Williams 30 May 2020

Lovely indeed! Must be a beautiful bride walking through this scenic poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2020

wow super imaginative writings feel there an adoration of love.....10++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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