Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Lovely Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.8

Day by day the beauty of darkness
all around multiplies and blooms
into a flower of treasure by which I fill
my trove at the time when I hate to see
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Abdul Wahab
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Marilyn Lott 23 May 2013

I agree, there is depth to this poem. Quite beautiful and yet sad. Very good.

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Marilyn Lott 23 May 2013

I agree, there is depth to this poem. Quite beautiful and yet sad. Very good.

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Heather Wilkins 23 May 2013

When nothing fills the void there surely will be emptiness. A great verse. One must read deep to find the true meaning of your write. super!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 May 2013

Innocent is being ditched and criminals, flatterer, treachery a dark fruit laden tree people love them as the day pass so the darkness increases it will be upto the dusk when light will lost then all will wait for the new sunshine nice poem

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