Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Lovely Cap (Limerick - 10) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tom once bought a lovely cap
Placed it on head went to tap
In tap found no water
Wind beheaded cap better
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Milan Panda 26 October 2020

This poem has given me unlimited fun. This made me laugh at the rate.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 July 2019

One striking feature of your poems I think is childlike innocence. This limerick has that freshness. Lovely.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 March 2017

An interesting Limerick............................................................

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 March 2017

A clever usage of words with rhyme and a humorous act that makes this Limerick delightful. :) Kumarmani ji, happy to vote a full 10++

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

Interesting Limerick. Enjoyed reading it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2017

Lap, nap, snap, map, swap! With the muse of life. Nice piece of work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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