Tom once bought a lovely cap
Placed it on head went to tap
In tap found no water
Wind beheaded cap better
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One striking feature of your poems I think is childlike innocence. This limerick has that freshness. Lovely.
An interesting Limerick............................................................
A clever usage of words with rhyme and a humorous act that makes this Limerick delightful. :) Kumarmani ji, happy to vote a full 10++
Lap, nap, snap, map, swap! With the muse of life. Nice piece of work.
This poem has given me unlimited fun. This made me laugh at the rate.