Thursday, October 3, 2019

Lovely Butterflies Comments

Rating: 4.6

Lovely butterflies
Swim into the humid air
Like petals flying.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 15 May 2023

What a beautiful simile! ! !

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

Swim into the humid air Like petals flying.

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

Oh dear; how amazing and bland this unique imagery? even the poet here can understand the virtue of butterfly...get a full mark without doubt....excellent masterpiece of work

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Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2020

Nice imagery. Brilliant haiku 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2019

A lovely poem! I sincerely appreciate the fabulous use of simile! To MyPoemList

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

A rare observation so true, yes they hardly fly, they seem to swim in air, and yes, it looks as if petals are flying. A great Haiku.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2019

Muse of the Butterflies in the air! ! 🦋🦋🦋🎶 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shaun Cronick 04 October 2019

A lovely, heart-felt write Rose Marie. Short and it glides and lingers forever, like a good poem should. You always see the good things in life and I salute you. Thank you for writing and sharing this Rose Marie.10++ and added to my treasure chest. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 October 2019

Hi Rose Marie, Beautiful little poem. An ode to The Creator, who gave us vision and aesthetic sense to enjoy beauty.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 October 2019

An amazing haiku, dear ate Rose. I love it...10+++

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2019

Like petals flying......beautiful.Thank u, dear friend. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2019

A spllediid short work with illustrious poetic beauty! Loved reading this cute poem....10

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Akhtar Jawad 03 October 2019

I was just an ugly insect, when I loved a colorful flower, colorful wings were developed in me, now I am a flying flower. A beautiful poem!

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Sandra Feldman 03 October 2019

Butterflies, So perfectly and poetically set: " Like petals flying" Just about the best, Ever written or said!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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