Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Lovely And Fine Comments

Rating: 5.0

You it is lovely and fine
Everything looks divine
Moon shines from far
You seem to be shining star
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Like 19 Feb by Miki Anon to Lovely and fine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

You it is lovely and fine Everything looks divine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

Lovely! Jazmin Almeida7 minutes ago The rhymes you used make this one fun to read but some seemed a little forced. Overall, I liked it! It's mysterious to me, which I find appealing in a poem. Keep writing! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

lovely chris Cowan10 minutes ago You are near

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

Comment +1 . John Cantwell10 minutes ago . nice one

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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