Thursday, December 8, 2005

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Why are we so at daggers drawn,
With anger and with hate,
Why has this become a duel at dawn,
Why can't we now relate.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 29 July 2008

A cleverly written piece carrying the rhyme through its entirity. Lovely poem. Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2006

Yes we are so overwelmed by the negative emotional aspect of a situation.Who's wrong? Who's right? that we only too often forget the most important emotion of all.LOVE. Another great poem from you Ernestine, Love Duncan

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Emma Johnson 11 March 2006

What a rally. Beautiful. Susie.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 December 2005

There is much hurt in relationships, loneliness in being alone, but I like your poem.

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Mary Nagy 08 December 2005

I loved it! I can totally empathize with you here Ernestine.......I think we all experience this feeling throughout our marriages. Sincerely, Mary

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Allan James Saywell 08 December 2005

friends or lovers usually you cant be both for there is a thin line between love and hate i find it very hard to be friends with my ex lovers Warm regards AJS

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***** ********* 08 December 2005

Like the poem a lot Ernestine, but that last line was a little too crass for my taste. Very sweet sentimental piece though.9 from Tai.

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