Sunday, August 19, 2007

Loveless Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

The early morning sun creeps into the room
with the promise of a new day.
i stir from my sleep
an unfamiliar room greets me
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christopher murphy
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Lalay Allan 28 February 2009

Very sad indeed. To spend the night with someone who couldn't give you love is like riding a bus with a stranger sitting beside you. Excellent write.

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Sad.... it doesn't have to be this way. What a clear picture you have painted in my mind with the words written here.

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