Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Loveless Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I lay still, awake at night,
Your silent figure lies in my sight,
So close yet I feel separated,
It seems our meeting was not fated.
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Tui Goodwin
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Chitra - 16 October 2009

intense write about what love can do our lives...well penned

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Obinna Eruchie 14 October 2009

'I feel the end but can’t turn away, / Pain feels like home so on I stay, / I hope that I do not fade, / Living in hope that someday I will no longer feel betrayed.' What emotional lines, interesting to read. What hope is there in what is hopeless? After all one is indulging in more pain for betting on a hope that has no future.

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Patrick A. Martin 14 October 2009

If this is a fact of life for you i suggest you get out of there and get a happy life. but this is a really good poem nics and honest about the emo/10

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Carol Gall 13 October 2009

lovely poem of how we can be trapped10

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Ismael Iniguez Carvajal 13 October 2009

me gusta la mal vida... its a spanish saying...for people who love troubled lives, sometimes it can entrap us, and we can't escape its grasp...Its sad that love at times is just exactly that. wonderful poem

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