Monday, September 8, 2008

Loved, Yet Unloved Comments

Rating: 5.0

the phone rings,
yet i make no move to get it,
they can wait, this can't
my hand hurts like hell
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Jessica LaDuron
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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

Love come Love go, alike dawn and dusk, dont worry! Love exist all over, just choose and pick, thus going on........... finely written.....10+

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Ency Bearis 08 September 2008

a great narrative poem...well penned...with strong deliverance that can touch anybodys' emotion...well done..A10 Ency Bearis

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 September 2008

hi jessi, im deeply touched after reading this remarkable piece of yours.what a heartfelt story yer got there jessie! !

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Jessica LaDuron

Jessica LaDuron

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