Love is the essence of life.
Life is beautiful, when love is there.
It's we who mess up our lives, unaware.
Then we cease to see love, as our eyes
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Oh this is lovely work. Beautiful truths framed in beautiful words. I found it late - been missing a treat!
@Susy Evelyne, Thanks for appreciating the poem. Much inspired by your kind words!
An exquisite poem, seamlessly composed. I especially much-loved the last stanza; as everyone's definition of love varies. Well written poem, Mr. Ahsan!
@Cassandra Jasmine, Thank you for reading my poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. Much inspired by your comment.
Thank you, Caroline Jaya. The comment is truly generous, a poet's treasure.
Beautiful poem. The command on the feelings, language and rhyming scheme is superb!
yeah, agree Heather a good advice in a great poem thanks for sharing
@ Sj Holland, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment. I do appreciate! Love is gentle. Command has no place here.
@Justus Mauti, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment here.
body language can convey the message. nice thought. love is a universal feeling, makes life worth while.
Dear Heather, Thank you very much for your nice comment on my poem. Yes, love is a universal feeling.
Love and life! ! Peace on earth. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks to you too, dear Edward Kofi Louis, for your appreciative comment.