Love, when you play,
Your piano hits a chord
Tremendously as melody
Inspiring my veins,
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yes the piano gives wings to our soul, doesn't it? ? ? nicely done.
love placed side by side with music...the music of a loved one.the tune of melody heard from a loved one.A nice poem Obinna
A flute of air whistles through my lips I cannot understand the flow of ivory Silver is all my fingers know A beautiful poem, it conveys the beauty of making music
I found it Obinna it is gorgeous it's inspiring that a writer of your caliber liked my little poem
The timeless quality of romance...very lovely. Kind wishes, Sandra
Very lovely poem. Ok you get the piano music all as comforted souls. Best wishes
Awesome! It made me feel relaxed with the melody this poem brought to my senses. I agree with Rajkumar I also love those lines. Thanks for sharing. best regards, jdh
Dear Obinna, Thanks for your invite. loved the line - 'as melody Inspiring my veins, sprout light into life'=== That's what is melody and why the piano will listen to your fingers unless you love him? It seems you are in love with music. Rated high. Request you to visit my site and comment and rate my poems posted recently. Rajkumar
you have presented a wonderful poem.....very good diction 10+
Wonderful........every chord striken is every beauty unveiled..........
such a calming poem..excellent choice of words and thoughts were neatly penned in a very organzied fashion..i am writing a peice that is similar to this peice..i will b sure to send it to u to read
Very nice poem, excellent word choice, it presents the poem nicely
This is a beautiful poem, Obinna. Short and terse. Really nice to read it.
Piano hits a chord. Through tremendous melody this touched life. Soul embraces with great dignity. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10