Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Love, Your Piano! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Love, when you play,
Your piano hits a chord
Tremendously as melody
Inspiring my veins,
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

Piano hits a chord. Through tremendous melody this touched life. Soul embraces with great dignity. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

To sprout light into life. Nice work.

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Craig Steiger 23 May 2010

yes the piano gives wings to our soul, doesn't it? ? ? nicely done.

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Uchenna Nnodum 16 January 2010

love placed side by side with music...the music of a loved one.the tune of melody heard from a loved one.A nice poem Obinna

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Liz Annson 13 December 2009

A flute of air whistles through my lips I cannot understand the flow of ivory Silver is all my fingers know A beautiful poem, it conveys the beauty of making music

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alice sunderland 02 December 2009

its very good. comment 104.

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Scott Gervaise 13 November 2009

I found it Obinna it is gorgeous it's inspiring that a writer of your caliber liked my little poem

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Conor Ross 07 November 2009

This poem is absolutley brilliant, great description.

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Sandra Fowler 05 November 2009

The timeless quality of romance...very lovely. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Cheung Shun Sang 01 November 2009

Very lovely poem. Ok you get the piano music all as comforted souls. Best wishes

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Awesome! It made me feel relaxed with the melody this poem brought to my senses. I agree with Rajkumar I also love those lines. Thanks for sharing. best regards, jdh

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 27 October 2009

Dear Obinna, Thanks for your invite. loved the line - 'as melody Inspiring my veins, sprout light into life'=== That's what is melody and why the piano will listen to your fingers unless you love him? It seems you are in love with music. Rated high. Request you to visit my site and comment and rate my poems posted recently. Rajkumar

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Elsee Daniel 27 October 2009

you have presented a wonderful poem.....very good diction 10+

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Lalitha iyer 27 October 2009

Wonderful........every chord striken is every beauty unveiled..........

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Ahtivah Lawton 26 October 2009

such a calming poem..excellent choice of words and thoughts were neatly penned in a very organzied fashion..i am writing a peice that is similar to this peice..i will b sure to send it to u to read

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Aaron Burr 26 October 2009

Very nice poem, excellent word choice, it presents the poem nicely

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Ala Elouri 26 October 2009

I like it. It has a rhyming rhythm. :) Good work.

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Braja K Sarkar 26 October 2009

Lovely, musical poem.I like it.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 October 2009

This is a beautiful poem, Obinna. Short and terse. Really nice to read it.

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Gabi Ngubeni 26 October 2009

Beautiful poem. It is playing me to love...

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