Monday, May 23, 2016

Love Your Freedom Comments

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I am bird.
Like all creatures
I value my freedom.
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Mohabeer Beeharry
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Sumit Ganguly 02 June 2016

Caged bird is a good metaphor. Nice.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 02 June 2016

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Tribhawan Kaul 02 June 2016

Freedom is one precious aspect of life to cherish till death...a poignant metaphorical write...lovely. Thanks for visiting my poem ' Love, peace and harmony'

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Mohabeer Beeharry 02 June 2016

Thank you so very much again for reading and commenting. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2016

Having been imprisoned for so long! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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