Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Love You Wife Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am curled in a ball,
Shivering with rage,
And he crouches in front of me,
His eyes saying all
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Lucifera Santez
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Enoch Desewu 03 November 2013

Love staring out in spades, He holds my hand, And looks me in the eye, Of all the things to do, And all the things to say, He says he loves me, And I say it’s okay…… Nice poem

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Enoch Desewu 03 November 2013

Love staring out in spades, He holds my hand, And looks me in the eye, Of all the things to do, And all the things to say, He says he loves me, And I say it’s okay…… Nice poem

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Enoch Desewu 03 November 2013

Love staring out in spades, He holds my hand, And looks me in the eye, Of all the things to do, And all the things to say, He says he loves me, And I say it’s okay…… Nice poem

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Khairul Ahsan 04 October 2013

'And I say it’s okay…………' That's it! Loved the happy ending, but be watchful all the way...........! Thanks for giving love a chance, I am always for it!

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Heather Wilkins 22 September 2013

an excellent write expressing emotions. a lovely ending.

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Poetheart Morgan 17 September 2013

Very well expressed all this love contained! ! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 September 2013

Beautiful write. I loved the way you expressed it.

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