Miles away…your voices drifting
Far away…your crying milling
Apocalypse now…or never
The night is still freezing
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nice peice...very good. the last line is..a little off, but it's a cool poem. well wrote.
I Sulaiman i think that this poem is very lovely one, on the one to ten chart i would give you ten plus 10+ for such outstanding work you should post more poem to me i think your poems have me at your footsteps. Love Chevelle
very nice poem that show how love can be some times confusing.not knowing what to do.i like it alot.
Good. I think the more one is affected of something, the more beautiful is the way the emotions / words / poem comeout.
Ahh, the long distance relationship. Loving from afar, no easy task. Stirs a mix of emotions. Very well written.
i love this poem it makes you think that you are the preson within the poem
THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! ! .. i truly lovvve it.It has the perfect words to go to it.This has got to be 1 of the best poems ive read on this site.KEEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
What a beautiful poetry! So far, this is one of the best love poem I've ever read. Its a classic! ! You're a happenin poet.I believe many women would fall for you after reading this piece. Love Alia.
i think, ths is the 10th x i read ths poem..very romantc, very nice, , , i felt ur sweetness in ths poem hon.. very very niccccccceeeeee..i reli like ths 1..
wow. seductive! i love it! it's burning with pasion, great job
wow that was so sweet, it was beautiful i loved it absolutely! it's a 10! ~Hazel G.E
Brilliant piece, emotionally piercing. I'm totally blown over. Passionate piece
Your poem is powerful and it shines brighter than mine. This is a very creative piece of work. Please comment on my poems called My Own Sea, Self-Destroy and A Mother's Purity.10 for this poem!
Sweet heavenly juices You produce from luscious I drink it all this is very passionate and shows your longing and yearning. it expresses your distance to the closeness you desire. lovely job
A very nice, romantic poem.. Thanks..