Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Love You, Sis; D Comments

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THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO MY BROTHER'S WIFE OR SHALL I CALL HER MY SISTER:

can you tell me what happened to the world that i'm living in
it seems like i'm surrounded by strangers all around
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Zubaida Boland
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Wali Jamali 28 July 2008

can you tell me what happened to the world that i'm living in it seems like i'm surrounded by strangers all around even though they are close to me somehow but i guess they changed everywhere i go, all the people talk about the way you look you must have a splurge bag according to them they don't care what's the jewel you got inside or greed your money is what matters most to them but underneath it all i still thank god for having someone like you......................... Zeb, the start is quite arresting. It touches the inner chords. And then, a catharsis- a true one as words do make us feel uplifts the spirit of the poem.

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