Love You Forever Comments

Great flow as always good work

as carl says**** your english may not be the best. but your expression of love does. good write

Beautiful poem Kranti. Very well structured with apt, sweet sounding words. Very effective love poem

This is a beautifully expressed poem, Kranthi, and it attemps rhyming nobly, but because you are writing in a second or third language, your grammar and rhyming needs some help. I know it is very difficult to do so as well as a person who normally speaks English all of the time can do, though some of them even have problems with our language! I will look over your poem and offer some suggestions to you via messsage to improve your rhyming (some words do not rhyme with each other at all) and the way it is phrased (grammar is the problem) . Still, it is the sentiment expressed in this poem that make it a very appealing write. Carl.

Men do put women on a pedestal at times

another poem with rhymes and rhythm............a beautiful write.........

How beautiful she is, Kranthi, like this poem, like rhymes and rhythm of this poem. A wonderful love tribute.

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This was just so plain and simple yet so heartfelt, sweet and romantic...........LOVE YOU FOREVER.............written with great end rhymes and rhythm...10

I just have to ask who made you want to write that poem who did you write it for because who ever did is lucky to know you! ! ! ! ! ! AMAZING POEM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !