Sunday, October 2, 2011

Love You, Deadly Comments

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LOVE YOU, DEADLY
My love,
If you wish to kiss me,
Keep it simple stupid.
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ojok phillips awany
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you are great at figurative writing, devise means of integrating rhymes in your meters it can be in order of ABABCB, ABBA, etc any arrangement of rhyme for a poem sounds like a soothing flute with rhyme. write till cows come home, we will soon inherit this country and they will know we once existed

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