Sunday, April 3, 2011

Love You Baby Comments

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You peek out of the curtains
Giggling, laughing
After a minute
You hide again
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Kathryn Busch
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 02 July 2011

The inquisitiveness of a child is really funny. You never know what a child does next. The poem has been very well written and it creates a sense of childishness in the mind of the reader! Well Done Kate

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Taylor Kile 17 April 2011

thats good: D<33333 i really like it.you got talent

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