Love You Comments

This is a story poem. I like story poems. At the beginning and at the end it was a little confusing about who was being addressed by this poem. The request to be left alone at the end seems to indicate that it was a girlfriend of sorts. I am not sure. Whoever it was, was not needed anymore. It was a nice ending. GW62

a very cute poem i like it very much

I like this poem, probably one of my fav's. It's not just a poem it's a story. Are you two still together? I hope so because by reading this poem, you loved her alot! XOXO, Kolee

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i really like this poem.. it is so passion it.Geart poem. -Xanadu-

Didn't Naomi Wolf say 'When the gap is closed, the lover embraces only his own disillusion.' But you didn't embrace it, huh? You questioned and got the truth. Nice poem. Xs and Os